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Punit Thakkar's avatar

That's an awesome new format, I also read your poem on Bob's Substack, super impressed!

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Arjan Tupan's avatar

It is, isn't it. I really like it. It is also fun to write. Quite challenging. Bob is really great with repeating lines. He also writes wonderful villanelles. You should give it a go.

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Punit Thakkar's avatar

Oof, difficult challenge, let me think it through!

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Arjan Tupan's avatar

Well, I do love a challenge, but in this case I meant as writing practice. It's a good exercise for your poeting muscles. You don't have to make it public. It's like push-ups. People only have to see the result :)

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Punit Thakkar's avatar

Good idea!

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