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Thank you Arjun!! for sharing my Trigger Play poem, you are the best audience :) and I loved the A. D. Mr. Wendal video. Yes, important lyrics delivered with an open hand regarding humanity, art can get through when little else can, boy do we need it. hugs, K

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You are more than welcome, K. It is great poetry, and you have a great substack that I believe more people should enjoy. And indeed: open hands, and open hearts, are what we need. Hugs back

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That Arrested Development song is one of my favourites! I had their cd and played it on repeat for several years. Thanks for reminding me of it 💖

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Yes, I played it quite often, too. The whole cd is great, but this song is always coming back to me.

Thanks for reading and commenting, Lisa. Hope all is well up north :)

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All good up here, Arjan 💙 but not much blue sky 😅

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" ... ink fractalizing / into fibers." is excellent. Real closeup on what's happening. Sometimes I think only the tritriplicata form could find that image.

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Thank you. A closeup, indeed.

The form helps me, but also forces me to make choices. It could be a good tool for creation in that sense. If you can't seem to make something work, force it into a tritriplicata (or haiku) and see what you arrive at, then use that for the real work.

Anyway, I like this form. Thanks for the appreciation!

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